I think there is some good stuff in this section but the transition from the talk of suicide to sexytime is too quick. I rewrote on Sunday night and I think it's better now. I'll be doing another reading at the next NYCPlaywrights meeting (if we are not snowed out again!)
Wow, I'm a writing machine lately - major JULIA & BUDDY revisions, a new 10-minute play, JASMINE, my first featuring serious on-stage violence (prostitute vs. Calvinist) and a new full-length, A CHRISTMAS CTHULU which will be done probably around... Christmas. It won't be any too holly jolly though...
